X-Men 186: They're Possessed! - Revision history

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	There are two other girls present, presumably Socorro and Ruby. One is Black, the other Latino; both appear to be of an age with Wren and in similar condition. It would be the act of a second to telepathically rouse Wren or any one of them.		There are two other girls present, presumably Socorro and Ruby. One is Black, the other Latino; both appear to be of an age with Wren and in similar condition. It would be the act of a second to telepathically rouse Wren or any one of them.

	Wake up, Wren		''Wake up, Wren''

	The girl's eyes flutter open, followed by a "Woah. Rachel! Great to see you." Her eyes, glassy and guileless as ever, flick over to Peter and back, "Mickey told me that things between you and Gabe didn't work out but I see you found somebody. That's great."		The girl's eyes flutter open, followed by a "Woah. Rachel! Great to see you." Her eyes, glassy and guileless as ever, flick over to Peter and back, "Mickey told me that things between you and Gabe didn't work out but I see you found somebody. That's great."

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	We’re back in Storm’s room inside Forge’s apartments in Dallas. The room is lit only by the light of the curtained window. Storm starts awake, spinning out of bed holding a knife in a fighting stance. Seeing the figure in the shadows she relaxes. “Forge told me that his security system was decades ahead of the state of the art,” she says with a smile		We’re back in Storm’s room inside Forge’s apartments in Dallas. The room is lit only by the light of the curtained window. Storm starts awake, spinning out of bed holding a knife in a fighting stance. Seeing the figure in the shadows she relaxes. “Forge told me that his security system was decades ahead of the state of the art,” she says with a smile

	"Oh, it's top-notch. However." Logan half-smiles back. "How you doin'? Didn't mean to startle ya, figured it might be a good to make sure all was on the up and up."		"Oh, it's top-notch. However." Logan half-smiles back. "How you doin'? Didn't mean to startle ya, figured it might be a good time to make sure all was on the up and up."

	She puts the knife down, "It is, as far as I can tell. I think I should keep using the Richards' as a, what's the term, 'cut-out'? To protect the X-Men just in case Forge isn't being truthful or his government contacts have compromised his communications."		She puts the knife down, "It is, as far as I can tell. I think I should keep using the Richards' as a, what's the term, 'cut-out'? To protect the X-Men just in case Forge isn't being truthful or his government contacts have compromised his communications."

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	==Pages 2-4 (Everyone)==		==Pages 2-4 (Everyone)==
	A Haunting Halloween Tale		A Haunting Halloween Tale
	Written by ~~Rebecca~~ "~~Wolverine~~" ~~Stevenson~~		Written by Myles "Nightcrawler" Corcoran
	Penciled by ~~Myles~~ "~~Nightcrawler~~" ~~Corcoran~~		Penciled by Rebecca "Wolverine" Stevenson
	Inked by Lisa "Colossus" Padol		Inked by Lisa "Colossus" Padol
	Colored by Kris "Sprite" Keegan		Colored by Kris "Sprite" Keegan

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	Months ago, when the X-Men first tangled with the new Mutants Wolverine commented that if the kids had the skill to match their spunk they’d be dangerous. Somehow, in the absence of any real time for training, they have it. It’s been decades since he’s been this seamlessly ambushed, and he’s barely holding on to consciousness as Sunspot wraps the iron bar with its three hundred pounds of weight around his body and the hurls him across the storage room, out the second floor window and into the pool, where he sinks like a stone, the blood from his throat threading past his vision in the water.		Months ago, when the X-Men first tangled with the new Mutants Wolverine commented that if the kids had the skill to match their spunk they’d be dangerous. Somehow, in the absence of any real time for training, they have it. It’s been decades since he’s been this seamlessly ambushed, and he’s barely holding on to consciousness as Sunspot wraps the iron bar with its three hundred pounds of weight around his body and the hurls him across the storage room, out the second floor window and into the pool, where he sinks like a stone, the blood from his throat threading past his vision in the water.

	==Page 20 (Rachel)		==Page 20 (Rachel)==
	The brisk autumn afternoon has given Rachel a chance to meander the property to see how much has changed from her youth that hasn’t yet occurred, and how much she remembers of that. This takes her to the communications tower by Graymalkin Lane along the property line to Breakstone Lake, then along the shoreline to the cove, where her telekinesis lets her walk across the choppy water to the far side of the cove’s natural breakwater. It’s a sizable amount of concentration, but she’s holding herself stable while walking forward.		The brisk autumn afternoon has given Rachel a chance to meander the property to see how much has changed from her youth that hasn’t yet occurred, and how much she remembers of that. This takes her to the communications tower by Graymalkin Lane along the property line to Breakstone Lake, then along the shoreline to the cove, where her telekinesis lets her walk across the choppy water to the far side of the cove’s natural breakwater. It’s a sizable amount of concentration, but she’s holding herself stable while walking forward.

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	COGENT: no thanks. no idea when		COGENT: no thanks. no idea when

	Plus a thought bubble from Kitty: Like I trust you, Crypto, you fink.		Plus a thought bubble from Kitty: ''Like I trust you, Crypto, you fink.''

	There’s a knock on her half open door, and the lanky form of Sam Guthrie sticks his head in.		There’s a knock on her half open door, and the lanky form of Sam Guthrie sticks his head in.

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	''Combat mutants how?'' Xavier asks, knowing the answer		''Combat mutants how?'' Xavier asks, knowing the answer

	*How else? Those sentinels. Shaw Industries is building new ones for them. Shaw is tied in with some organization called the Hellfire Club.''		''How else? Those sentinels. Shaw Industries is building new ones for them. Shaw is tied in with some organization called the Hellfire Club.''

	''I know them'' Xavier grumbles		''I know them'' Xavier grumbles

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	“I know” Storm says. “I know.”		“I know” Storm says. “I know.”

	~~GFL issue 186~~ Page 15 (Aside – New Mutants)		==Page 15 (Aside – New Mutants)==
	A brief exterior shot of the mansion shows a bucolic autumn day with three of the New Mutants – Sam (Cannonball) Guthrie, Roberto (Sunspot) DaCosta and Rhane (Wolfsbane) Sinclair playing a game of improvised Tag/Hide and Seek in on the mansion’s grounds – powers allowed. As such Rhane is perpetually ‘It’ since in her wolf form there’d be no way the others could hide from her.		A brief exterior shot of the mansion shows a bucolic autumn day with three of the New Mutants – Sam (Cannonball) Guthrie, Roberto (Sunspot) DaCosta and Rhane (Wolfsbane) Sinclair playing a game of improvised Tag/Hide and Seek in on the mansion’s grounds – powers allowed. As such Rhane is perpetually ‘It’ since in her wolf form there’d be no way the others could hide from her.

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	[*ED Little Sister, in Russian]		[*ED Little Sister, in Russian]

	~~GFL issue 186~~ Pages 13-14 (Aside - Storm)		==Pages 13-14 (Aside - Storm)==
	We’re back in Forge’s apartment. Storm is still living there, and it’s clear from their stances that the two of them have become comfortable with each other, but also clearly not intimate. The room has the same appearance as last time we saw it - old wood and small windows. The couple is sitting on the couch and chair in the living area.		We’re back in Forge’s apartment. Storm is still living there, and it’s clear from their stances that the two of them have become comfortable with each other, but also clearly not intimate. The room has the same appearance as last time we saw it - old wood and small windows. The couple is sitting on the couch and chair in the living area.

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Pages 9-10 (Wolverine, Rachel and Nightcrawler)

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	Both Wolverine and Nightcrawler have "Ouch!" looks on their faces as the Danger Room claims another student-victim.		Both Wolverine and Nightcrawler have "Ouch!" looks on their faces as the Danger Room claims another student-victim.

	~~GLF issue 186~~ Page 11-12 (Kitty and Peter)		==Page 11-12 (Kitty and Peter)==
	A pensive Ilyana Rasputin is sitting with Dani Moonstar in Dani’s room. She’s clutching a pillow to her chest. “You promised you wouldn’t tell anyone.”		A pensive Ilyana Rasputin is sitting with Dani Moonstar in Dani’s room. She’s clutching a pillow to her chest. “You promised you wouldn’t tell anyone.”

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